| + ressurection of shards | Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu [12.Jun.23 12:15] |
| Existential, tipped towards surreal, love poem, with valuable, well developing own voice. The star is for the sublime touch of the last two lines, like a miracle resurrection of all shards, into the memory of the hourglass. Looking forward to your progress. rcm PS: Q: is "shadows forest" intentional? | |
| = forest of shadows | Ionut Popa [12.Jun.23 19:17] |
| Hi Romulus, Thank you for your kind words and for the star, I'm glad you enjoyed this poem! Regarding your question, I initially thought of "forest of shadows", but then I changed my mind and concluded that "shadows forest" sounded better. ImP | |
| = perfect... | Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu [13.Jun.23 13:52] |
| I did by all means like your option, just wanted to make sure it was deliberate. It does sound surreal, and deep meanwhile. rcm | |