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Corina Gina Papouis
[16.Sep.08 20:39]
Your moonlight is a fantastic fairy-tale which I read, in fascination, over and over again..the language flows easily with the chosen images, the reader's soul surrenders happily to this moonlight's beauty..Without a doubt, one of the best texts read in a while..
Congratulations!
P.S. I wish my star was real enough to go with your moon!:)

 =  Corina
florin caragiu
[17.Sep.08 10:54]
Thank you very much, Corina, for your remarks. Your star is a very precious one, you know, the lightmoon enjoys it :)

 =  thoughts under the moonlight!
Marius Surleac
[18.Sep.08 22:54]
Passion burns the core of your soul, smoothness and reminiscences. A nice romantic poem!

Cheers,
Marius

 =  some good stuff again
Simona Sumanaru
[13.Dec.08 15:53]
'our image in which the whole space rests'
'the mountains are keeping the future in clouds' (I'd say 'mountains keep the future in the clouds')
'we cannot resist to the miracles' (I'd say 'we cannot resist miracles')
'love is not reachable in the way you buy and sell' (I'd say 'love is not a matter of buying and selling')
'while the taste of paradise/keeps bright the night of our surrender' (I'd say 'while the taste of paradise/brightens the night of our surrender')

beautiful reflections of religion upon us!

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florin caragiu
[16.Dec.08 16:14]
Simona, thank you for the suggestions and appreciation. I enjoy your presence here.

 =  you're welcome Florin
Simona Sumanaru
[16.Dec.08 18:53]
This poems bears deep religious roots which were much enjoyed by me. Cheers!

 =  Marius, Simona
florin caragiu
[18.Dec.08 09:08]
Marius: Thank you very much for the words, you are right, it is a neoromantic fashion here.
Simona: I'm glad you feel thia way about the poem. Cheers!




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