| = my opinion | Yoanna D [10.Jan.09 14:30] |
| I think you did a great job with this poem, you combined the social perspective, the „need” to keep it private and to hide from things people don`t „like” with the sadness and loneliness of a child, the purity and vulnerability („tattooes”, marks of „unconditional” love) of a child`s body and soul, a great mix of social and emotional acts and consequences. It is such a clever and emotional poem and sooooo painful but very well done :) Best wishes, Ioana D. | |
| = Yoanna | Corina Gina Papouis [07.May.09 14:09] |
| sorry for a late reply...just found your message. it is a sad and true story of a little boy who died in London and words are far from being able to describe the feelings aroused by such shocking events. As a nation we have learnt to become more assertive and the law is now changing... However, for Baby P this is too late, we have failed him! Thanks for your thoughts! Corina PS ...more here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Death_of_Baby_P | |