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Corina Gina Papouis
[30.Apr.09 17:18]
...is a problem here!
I liked the idea of your poem, however, the text requires a review followed by quite a few changes (i.e. 'quickly life' should be 'quick life', 'future dark' - 'dark future', and other mistakes...)

Good luck with your work!

Corina

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= grammar...	Corina Gina Papouis [30.Apr.09 17:18]
...is a problem here! I liked the idea of your poem, however, the text requires a review followed by quite a few changes (i.e. 'quickly life' should be 'quick life', 'future dark' - 'dark future', and other mistakes...) Good luck with your work! Corina