| = :) | Corina Gina Papouis [24.May.09 22:51] |
| This is a good visual poem, is bold and different and I loved the fluency and the focus..Cleverly done! Cheers! Corina | |
| = Thank you, | Dora Road [25.May.09 02:08] |
| Corina. (: | |
| + master's piece | dan marius [25.May.09 11:30] |
| this is how we fall in love. might call it "where the rainbow begins". mixology is indeed a science. the cocktail of chemicals between us. and of course the warning. am I making any sense? :) think you wrote one of your best poems. congrats. my favorite: "and I know you're not gonna run now love/ because we've only just begun to kill each other" | |
| = dear dan marius, | Dora Road [25.May.09 15:34] |
| you're making perfect sense. that's indeed what the poem's about. the first chills, the sexual appetite, the impetus to consume the other, the primal and most egotistical phase of love that marks the beginning of the struggle for domination. thank you for the appreciation and the little star. *happy grin* by the way, is it dan or marius? (: | |
| = happiness is a fast gun | dan marius [25.May.09 17:35] |
| and then, the happy year ;) it's dan. dora? or mrs road? :) | |
| = bang bang, shoot shoot | Dora Road [25.May.09 18:40] |
| it's dora (": and we're friends now. stop univers :)) | |