| = boots on | Motoc Lavinia [14.Nov.06 23:07] |
| I like the way your words are marching here,it is touching but not pathetic, is vivid and bold. I think the subtitle reveals too much and deprives the reader of the need to try and find new, hidden meanings. | |
| = Words wearing boots | John Willy Kopperud [14.Nov.06 23:49] |
| As I have added in a comment to one of your poems. Lavinia, I have changed the subtitle. You were right. Thank you very much for the advice and the response to the content of the poem. Greetings from Wipperud | |
| = sharpness | felix nicolau [23.Nov.06 01:59] |
| this elliptic poem is full of substance and it's sharp as a thread. | |
| = Words wearing boots | John Willy Kopperud [25.Nov.06 13:06] |
| Thank you very much, Felix. It was born out of a need to express concern about political violence and totalitarian tendencies. | |