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= "two stars" from peruzele
Elena Malec
[22.Apr.04 02:01]
Eugen, I've read your poem with interest. It is indeed nice, but you know what? You can make it be great!
The way these electronic forms are set give one a headache; I'm not sure you noticed the second verse. Was this supposed to be
"the smell of rotten corpses those decay"?

Okay,
that's all for today;
If you ask me, I enjoyed, anyway.

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= "two stars" from peruzele	Elena Malec [22.Apr.04 02:01]
Eugen, I've read your poem with interest. It is indeed nice, but you know what? You can make it be great! The way these electronic forms are set give one a headache; I'm not sure you noticed the second verse. Was this supposed to be "the smell of rotten corpses those decay"? Okay, that's all for today; If you ask me, I enjoyed, anyway.