| = Equilibrium and beyond... and better! | Cristian Rusneac [07.Aug.04 23:18] |
| I think your poem has a promissing start but it doesn't keep its promise. | |
| = A little more | Diana Pacuraru [08.Nov.04 01:15] |
| Hmmmmm this poem doesn't have a certain message, a certain idea that leaves you after you read it. Try to work more with that | |