| = a few thoughts|
|you need to work a lot on your creations. there's obviously an ideea behind your stories but unfortunately you don't allocate enough time for writing. you should be more carefull with the spelling, with punctuation and with the overall aspect of your materials.|
only then you will convince your visitors to submit comments on your work.
Also, another way to get people to read and comment is to acces other people creations and comment on them subjectively, geting them to return the favor.
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