agonia
francais

v3
 

Agonia.Net | Règles | Mission Contact | Inscris-toi
poezii poezii poezii poezii poezii
poezii
armana Poezii, Poezie deutsch Poezii, Poezie english Poezii, Poezie espanol Poezii, Poezie francais Poezii, Poezie italiano Poezii, Poezie japanese Poezii, Poezie portugues Poezii, Poezie romana Poezii, Poezie russkaia Poezii, Poezie

Article Communautés Concours Essai Multimédia Personnelles Poèmes Presse Prose _QUOTE Scénario Spécial

Poezii Românesti - Romanian Poetry

poezii


 
Textes du même auteur


Traductions de ce texte
0

 Les commentaires des membres


print e-mail
Visualisations: 3976 .



The Big Eye\'s Planet
prose [ Science-Fiction ]
(inspired by Stargate SG1)

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
par [justme64 ]

2009-03-10  | [Ce texte devrait être lu en english]    | 



The seventh symbol was activated and the wormhole was functional, so SG-1 can pass through…
… On the new planet all is motionless. The team made some steps on the arid ground. But look! Millions of eyes, in millions of colors, arise from nowhere, flowing in the air. Later the team realized that every color represents a military or civilian grade.
One oh those eyes, the big of them, red colored, started to speak with a thunder voice; "Who are you, strangers? And what do you want from us?" In that moment the team was catch by an invisible trawl.
Vainly the star passengers try to explain their good intentions. Nobody listened them. They were took from there and bring to the king of that planet. That king, named Oky'oi, is the biggest eye from the planet. He was blue, the sign of a superior intelligence, and he contained the knowledge of his all-ancient civilization. He seems to be smart but cruel with the others, but loving and devoted to his son, the green Oky'shor.
Oky'oi discussed with the strangers and he decided that they are not to be able to survive cause they aren't so advanced as he was.
Only Dr Jackson can save the team from a cruel death; Daniel realized that Oky'shor, the child, could be an ally, which can help the team to survive. So he decides to make Oky'shor his friend and to gain his trust. But how can he do that? Simply, Daniel, with his blue and tender eyes, looks at Oky'shor, telling him one of our stories, something like "Snow White" or "Cinderella"… Oky'shor was enchanted by the story and asked to his father to forgive the humans and to let them their life. Oky'oi can't refuse the request of his beloved son and give them back the freedom.
Oky'oi can change his blue iris into a big screen on which he showed to the SG-1 team moments of the history of his planet, and of the Earth's history too… Moment of the past and moments from the future… And then he had teach the passengers how could they always take the best decisions only by searching their minds and using the power of the third hidden eye which it seems to exist in everyone of us.

.  |








 
shim La maison de la litérature shim
shim
poezii  Recherche  Agonia.Net  

La reproduction de tout text appartenant au portal sans notre permission est strictement interdite.
Copyright 1999-2003. Agonia.Net

E-mail | Politique de publication et confidetialité

Top Site-uri Cultura - Join the Cultural Topsites! .